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Contagious

Take me out into the darkness of the Contagious streets
Where I could save you
and you could simply save me

I'd never abandon you
so save me forever
and we'd never let go

Even if you were Contagious
I'd be kissing you till you were dead
Never even thinking twice
about the fate of my own life

I'll take you away where
the darkness can't find you
and we'd never get
Contagious

We'd never fall apart
so never let go of my
hand

and this last kill will never end

So I'd do anything, anything, anything
to hold your hand

I don't care if your sick
I don't care if your Contagious
so they'll never take us alive

The night can be deadly

I'd never let go of you're hand


The End

Written-8/17/10 posted- 8/20/10
Lol so I realized I never write happy poems
This is a weird but romance poem
not dedicated to anyone. Tho Inspired by: Pierce The Veil

I love it a lot!

a few lines I thank Pierce The Veil for inspiration!
sorta about zombies or something of the sort XD
Hope u all like it :]

Written by me

I just love the photo on the top! :]


This is going on my other account -------> :iconthreeohno3:
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:iconhatakeventus-silver:
HatakeVentus-Silver Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
love this too epic
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :)
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:iconneverhurtno1:
neverhurtno1 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Hey I featured this piece here [link]

keep up the great work ^^
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Oh cool thanks! 8D
Means a lot to me!

Thanks, I'll try.
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MaginaRevolution Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
is this photo by you?
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Oh no, I need to put that in the artist comments.
I found it on Google.
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:iconhaanyaan:
Haanyaan Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Writer
wow.... *ish intensely awestruck*
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
O_O REally?
8D
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:iconhaanyaan:
Haanyaan Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Student Writer
YES VERYYYYY :iconglompplz:
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Yaaaaaaaaay thanks!!!
8D
:w00t:
:iconglompplz:
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:iconhaanyaan:
Haanyaan Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010  Student Writer
No prob :D
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
w00t!!!
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:iconzinarc:
Zinarc Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist
I've been out-written. Despite it's not a rhyming poem, it's filled with such power and emotion. I kneel to you.
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Aww thanks! :]
I actually really don't like Ryming poems XD lol
Thansk so much, that means a lot to me.
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saphira3479 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
awsum poem, i love it! :D
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks so much!
8D
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saphira3479 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
no problem :D
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Out of curiosity, do you mean to use the word "contiguous"? Maybe I'm just thick, but I don't see how it fits in most places. I can see the word "contagious" but I don't see how "contiguous" fits apart from the first line. ^^;

Also, here:
I don't care if your sick
I don't care if your contiguous

The "your" should be "you're".

Anyway, other than those, this is awesome. I have to agree with Bri, your poetry skills have seriously improved.

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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
P.s you were totally right and thanks so much for pointing it out! XD
No even caught that except for you. haha
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Haha, thanks. xD;
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome, lol XD I was about to show it to my friend Brandon.
I'm glad I waited haha.
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Haha, awesome.
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I forgot what we were talking about.
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Same. xD
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
haha XD aw wells lol
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Umm okay, well I just kinda wrote what came to mind,
not all poetry has to make sense. I might have actually spelled the word wrong. I don't have Micrsoft word on my computer so I didn't have it to correct me at all which sucks. I only have the grammar thing on fire-fox. I'll fix it here in a little bit.

Thanks anyhow.
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
I know what you mean by the sense making, but I meant that the word choice didn't seem to fit. It's gonna be a stupid question, but what program do you use to write? I can't stand grammar check in browsers. |D;;;

You're welcome.
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Hahayeah I understand the second time I read the comment.lol
But yes I have an old computer abd it sucks it only has note-pad to write on and firefox to edit it :( It sucks! As you can see, contagious wasn't even spelled wright XD lol
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Haha, yeah. Aww, that sucks. D: I hate using notepad. Then again, I've only used it for HTML coding... :I
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Lol I hate it too :(
And I'mnever on my dad's compt to type, tho
I'm asking for a new comp for my b-day!
lol
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Ooh, good luck with that!
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Haha I hope I get one!
8D
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crocodilehinata Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
this is a really good poem! i like how its all like romantic and stu, gosh i am such a girly girl sometimes XP
i thought the peron at the top was a person with a elephant mask form a distance
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks!!! 8DDD
Haha I love romantic stuff :]
Lol really, my mom thought that too.
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:iconcrocodilehinata:
crocodilehinata Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
welcome!!!! :DDDD
me too, but i dont like being girly.
yeah it sorta looks like it
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Ll I'm okay with being girly sometimes.lol
Tho I like that I'm a huge romance freak. Tho I hate romance novels!
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crocodilehinata Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
lol i am too, but only if its likea cute thing, or a cute guy, or a sad movie.
i am too. i think thats why i love shojo so much and when i read shoen i make up couples when they arnt. i hate how some are like all dirty, and how some books turn out to be romantic, when i thought they whernt
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Lol yeah. Like I love romance, but I can be picky with it,haha.
I like romance but it needs a LOT of conflict or it has to be a side thing.
Haha same here I love Shojo's tho I can be picky with the art.lol
Yeah I make up couples for those XD Yeah totally!
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crocodilehinata Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
lol yeah. its like i kept hearign the true blood stuff was good, so i goa nd buy the book and it is just like romance stuff!! the first freaken chapter is tlaking about how this girl see's this hot vmapire in a bar.
lol i only read it if the story is good, and if it looks good.
lol i do to but they rearly come true.
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Oh god True Blood!
lol
-.- XD
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vhowardson444 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Writer
I LOVEEEEE EIIIIITTTTT!! OMG LOVE IT!!!!
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
8DDDDD Omg THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
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Je-C-Kuh13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is awesome, Carry. For serious. :D
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Really? Aww thanks so much!
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:iconje-c-kuh13:
Je-C-Kuh13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
LOL YAAAY!!!!!
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Garra4evr Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're right, Carry- this was just absolutely amazing. Your poetry skills have seriously improved, too ~<33333
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:iconcatchra13:
Catchra13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Really???? 8D
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Garra4evr Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YES. YES REALLY. ~<333333
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